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Sep-25-18
 | | perfidious: Be more than happy to: how do I go about it? |
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Sep-25-18
 | | Annie K.: Click on the red "vote on collections" link - at the top and center of this page. :) |
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Sep-25-18
 | | perfidious: Obvious, but I overlooked it--sounds like a typical chess player. Done. |
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Sep-25-18
 | | Annie K.: Thanks! |
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Sep-25-18
 | | OhioChessFan: Per Linares 89:
<but the event category would then have gone down > By an eyelash, I prefer "but the event category would have then gone down". Nothing big, I think it just flows better to keep "would have" together. |
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Sep-25-18
 | | OhioChessFan: As for "if there was a/some mass withdrawal", both are fine, but by a razor's edge I prefer "some" which conveys an admittedly subtle(won't deny it if you suggest non-existent) nuance of the unknown and intrigue and what have you. See for example: Maybe by some wild stroke of luck, the Cleveland Browns will have more wins this year than the New England Patriots. vs.
Maybe by a wild stroke of luck, the Cleveland Browns will have more wins this year than the New England Patriots. I think the first captures the sense of uncertainty and intrigue a little better, although the second is probably a little cleaner grammatically. But this is 51-49 in any case. <Korchnoi gives his version of what happened in "Chess Is My Life". He suggests that Karpov pushed hard for Baturinsky, knowing it would upset him, that Rentero was complicit, etc. He says Short and Timman supported him, and, to the surprise of Karpov, also Beliavsky and Yusupov, whom Karpov may have regarded as 'comrades in arms'. Gulko apparently wanted to support him, but was fearful of losing the tournament if there were a mass withdrawal. Korchnoi appreciates this, and is not angry with Gulko, who had supported him in the past. He speculates that had Gulko openly supported him, then the consensus might have changed. Baturinsky would have been forced out, Karpov would withdraw, and the tournament would collapse.> This is a little sloppy in verb tenses. I'd prefer a simple past tense in most cases: 1. Korchnoi gave
2. He suggested
3. He said
4. Korchnoi appreciated
5. and was not angry
6. He speculated
7. Karpov would have withdrawn
8. would have collapsed |
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Sep-25-18
 | | OhioChessFan: 1989:
<The 7th Torneo Internacional de Ajedrez "Ciudad de Linares" was organized under direction > "<the> direction" |
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Sep-25-18
 | | OhioChessFan: <He says Short and Timman supported him, and, to the surprise of Karpov, also Beliavsky and Yusupov, whom Karpov may have regarded as 'comrades in arms'.> Maybe not worth it, but just looked at that sentence again and realized that as written, it says Short and Timman supported Korchnoi, Beliavsky and Yusupov. It's a bit of a complicated sentence, but I think replacing "also" with "so did" cleans it up well enough. |
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Sep-26-18
 | | Tabanus: A special prize was awarded to Ohio for his nitpickery in Round 3. I left "were a mass withdrawal" for now - in fear of losing the votes if there <was> or <were> some mass withdrawal :) |
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Sep-26-18
 | | OhioChessFan: <By an eyelash, I prefer "but the event category would have then gone down". > After sleeping on it, and consulting my Nitpickery Thesaurus, I now strongly prefer the much better: "but then, the event category would have gone down" |
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Sep-26-18 | | mckmac: <A special prize was awarded ...> And from the cheap seats, a tip of the hat to Tabanus, Ohio, et al. |
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Sep-26-18 | | zanzibar: It seems nobody is maintaining the CC3's
Chessgames Country Codes
maybe for several years (modulo a few historical imperial additions). Given the ongoing 43e Olympiad,
43rd Chess Olympiad (2018) it's probably a good time to note the following codes are missing: <CPV DJI ERI KOS LBN LBR NRU SGP SSD> This list of CC3's can be culled out of the FIDE player_list: http://ratings.fide.com/download.ph....
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Note that BUL is no longer used by FIDE. All Bulgaria players are currently registered under the FID (FIDE) country code. They are 7294 players under that federation designation. . |
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Sep-26-18 | | zanzibar: I noticed that <CG> has uploaded the first two round games for the ongoing Olympiad. I haven't checked the name matching on the <CG>-side of things, but the official site download is problematic, as concerns player names: http://batumi2018.fide.com/en/pgn
(The R2 zip download actually includes two pgn's - one for each round) The problem with the names is frustrating - the FIDE collated style is used, but the <comma is missing>! Without the comma I'm worried that <CG> may be adding new player's with mangled names. Also, the official PGN can be patched, given that they include the FIDE id's for each player. It's unfortunate that <CG> strips out the FIDE id in the PGN. <We really should keep FIDE id's from tournament downloads.> I'm sounding the alarm to check any/all new players just added to <CG> from this tournament (but see below). * * * * *
This guy should have more bio data copied over from his FIDE card (which can be automated), but the name is OK: Baba Moulaye Abdalla Maiga The more critical cases would be those with Spanish naming conventions - but I don't know if I have time to hunt an example out at the moment. On the other hand, this Hong Kong player also gets the name <CG> correct: Henry Ho In Hei So maybe <CG> is using the FIDE id's for player names(?). Or maybe they're downloading the PGN from a different site? . |
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Sep-26-18 | | zanzibar: OK, looks like new players with Spanish names are being handed OK too, at least this one is: David Daniel Camacho Campusano Might be useful for <CG> to notify the <Bistro> with a list of new players created during all tournaments. . |
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Sep-26-18
 | | Tabanus: <but then, the event category would have gone down> it is. <CPV DJI ERI KOS LBN LBR NRU SGP SSD> Well, CG is busy at the moment. The codes should be added, but there are not many TI events from those countries. |
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Sep-26-18 | | zanzibar: <Tab> let me know when the CC's get updated, I believe a couple of mistakes need to be corrected in the list (LIB and SIN). |
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Sep-27-18
 | | Tabanus: Linares (1989) and Linares (1990) added to TI. I'm working on Game Collection: Linares 1991, that will be my last for now. The two first paragraphs are ready for nitpicking, if you're not exhausted. I'm definitely running out of gas, but the English suggestions I can almost slavishly follow and spend little energy on. |
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Sep-27-18
 | | OhioChessFan: <The players stayed in Rentero's Hotel Anibal, where also the games were played.> Delete "also".
A couple other quibbles coming but I don't have time now. |
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Sep-27-18
 | | OhioChessFan: <Fourteen players had signed up for the event in October 1990, and of these, two players, Nigel Short (#15) and Miguel Illescas Cordoba (#98), were replaced by Gurevich and Speelman.> I think this should be broken up into two sentences for clarity's sake. Perhaps: Fourteen players had signed up for the event in October, 1990. Two of them, Nigel Short (#15) and Miguel Illescas Cordoba (#98), were replaced by Gurevich and Speelman. |
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Sep-27-18
 | | OhioChessFan: <At the opening ceremony, FIDE president Florencio Campomanes attended the draw for the Candidates quarterfinal matches that would take place in August. Later, at 5 am in the morning> Instead of "Later", I think "The next day" would be better. |
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Sep-27-18
 | | OhioChessFan: <Kasparov, who used to take a nap between 1 pm and 2:30 pm, had his room next to Karpov, who used to listen to music. The world champion protested, and the hotel management cut the piped music to all customers.> I think "...Karpov, who enjoyed listening to the hotel's piped in music. The world champion protested, and the hotel management cut out the piped music to all customers." would be better. I sort of dislike my repetition of "piped" there, so it still might be improved. |
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Sep-27-18
 | | OhioChessFan: <Unlike last year, there were now electronic chess boards which recorded the moves. > Instead of "last", I prefer "the previous". |
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Sep-27-18
 | | Tabanus: Thanks Ohio. The first part of paragraph 3 is ready also. My bedtime now. |
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Sep-27-18
 | | OhioChessFan: <In Round 5 he also beat Karpov, and this was his first wins against the two 'K's'. > A little sloppy. Perhaps:
“Then in Round 5 he beat Karpov. These were his first wins against the two “K’s’. |
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Sep-28-18
 | | GrahamClayton: What is the easiest way for me to update my player page to include a biography? |
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