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   Jun-07-15 Biographer Bistro (replies)
 
WCC Editing Project: <zanzibar: Since I'm an adviser to editors, rather than an editor, I'm unfamiliar with what exactly editors can do.> I want to bring this post to your attention again: Biographer Bistro (kibitz #10966) It explains what editors can do and what not.
 
   May-31-15 chessgames.com chessforum (replies)
 
WCC Editing Project: <chessgames.com> Maybe you overlooked this post Biographer Bistro (kibitz #11028) , since the Bistro has become rather fast-paced. An answer would be interesting to several people.
 
   May-29-15 WCC Editing Project chessforum (replies)
 
WCC Editing Project: <Chessical> Thank you very much for your contribution(s)! We hope that you will support us in the future, also. For sure, you have helped us quite a lot already. The draft in question is already finished and was send away, though. It is still a valuable source and
 
   Apr-01-15 Moscow (1925) (replies)
 
WCC Editing Project: <Capablanca> on his experience at <Moscow 1925>: <"Although very philosophical, very observant and completely dispassionate in my judgment about everything concerning chess and its great exponents, I was nonetheless <<<unable to ...
 
   Mar-08-15 Tabanus chessforum (replies)
 
WCC Editing Project: Ribli - Torre Candidates Quarterfinal (1983) Audiovisual aid: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W8G...
 
   Mar-08-15 Alekhine - Bogoljubov World Championship Match (1929) (replies)
 
WCC Editing Project: <beatgiant> In case you want to read further on this topic, I have prepared a sourced timeline that summarizes the <Alekhine-Capablanca> rematch negotiations from 26 Feb 1929 - March 1935: Game Collection: WCC: Alekhine-Bogoljubov 1934 ARCHIVE
 
   Jan-29-15 suenteus po 147 chessforum (replies)
 
WCC Editing Project: <One Third of the original "Big Three"> I beg your pardon! I'm on vacation in Canada, and I just now saw your post in the WCC forum. By "we" I meant the cg.com biographers, not the WCC project. All of the research compiled for additions to your intro was done by ...
 
   Nov-23-14 R Fuchs vs Tal, 1969 (replies)
 
WCC Editing Project: <MC Scarlett> If so, very very quietly...
 
   Nov-19-14 Alexander Alekhine (replies)
 
WCC Editing Project: <Karpova> Thanks for the correction! That sum makes more sense now in conjunction with the report on the organizers' losses. Good heavens- they can't have made much on ticket sales.
 
   Nov-17-14 E Walther vs Tal, 1966
 
WCC Editing Project: Queen trap Trick or Treat- this game was played on Halloween, 1966.
 
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WCC Editing Project

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Mar-19-14
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  WCC Editing Project: <Ohio>

I'm not sure where, and when, I will post information form our current Draft under Examination that doesn't make it into the "Final Draft for Promotion" text.

I can assure you that for other Drafts I've been doing it regularly since I started our WCC project 8 months ago. I just did it a few days ago here:

Zurich Candidates (1953)

I originally found and stored that information some time ago into our Mirror here: Game Collection: WCC: Botvinnik-Smyslov 1954

I also regularly post research I just did in a given Mirror onto a relevant game page, almost at the same time, mainly so I won't forget which game page is actually relevant to the given research.

I'm curious as to why you don't believe I won't post any of the "extra" research I did for our current Draft under Examination?

I can tell you one thing though- I don't go around posting research that <Karpova> did for our project on other pages. If I wanted to do that in an instance, I'd ask her first- because maybe she wants to post it herself.

As for corrections, I do make an effort to make sure I have not made a typographical transcription error when I post research in a Draft. I check again a second time if I use that same material on another page.

Errors in other people's writing other than transcription errors shouldn't be corrected in any other way unless <sic> is used. You can't "correct" quotes from other sources.

Mar-19-14
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  WCC Editing Project: <Ohio>

Sorry, forgot to answer this part-

All of the work at WCC is already a permanent record, because Daniel made this an "account in perpetuity."

Mar-19-14
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  OhioChessFan: <I'm curious as to why you don't believe I won't post any of the "extra" research I did for our current Draft under Examination?>

There's some stuff that needs to be corrected if it's going to be posted somewhere. If not, I won't worry about it.

Mar-19-14
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  WCC Editing Project: <Ohio>

Aha ok thanks for clarifying.

Yes, the material *will* be posted elsewhere. Where and when, exactly, I couldn't say at this point.

As for the needed corrections:

Do you mean corrections for typos from the directly sourced speech from a source?

As mentioned, I do make an effort to correct such mistakes when I make a post somewhere else on the site. I also do a second proofread for such typos in the "View Kibbutz" box before I post it. And usually a few minutes later I look at the post and check one more time if I made any typos. I've deleted and re-edited more than a few times in this "final phase." Of course I still end up posting some mistakes.

But I don't believe I need any extra help with that kind of correction.

If you are talking about misspellings in text I actually wrote, I also try to find those errors before posting, and double check.

If you are talking about style edits for text I wrote to explain, introduce, or analyze the direct source material, I don't believe I need help with that either. That said, if I were struggling with getting a phrase, or word right from one of our archived research write-ups, I would not hesitate to seek you out and ask for your help.

Your help is fundamentally invaluable to this WCC project, and also to the past and (possibly future) Cg.com bios I wrote.

Mar-19-14
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  OhioChessFan: As one example, the word "2nds" is used in the current draft when referring to "seconds" and I find that unacceptable.
Mar-19-14
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  WCC Editing Project: Actually, I just deleted and reposted my reply to you, because I noticed two typos in the previously posted version.

<achieve> was a big proponent of deleting and re-editing posts that you notice have mistakes in them, before the 30 minute "delete" limit expires. He was the first person who advised me to do this.

Mar-19-14
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  OhioChessFan: <In Moscow the masters played in the magnificent Salle Des Colonnes in front of 2,000 spectators, with 3,000 more in the streets outside following the action on a giant demonstration board.>

I'd like a comma after "Moscow". And it should be lower case d in "des".

Mar-19-14
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  OhioChessFan: That sentence is a bit run onny.

Maybe "In Moscow, the masters played in the magnificent Salle des Colonnes in front of 2000 spectators. 3000 more were in the streets outside following the action on a giant demonstration board."

Mar-19-14
Premium Chessgames Member
  WCC Editing Project: <Ohio>

Do you mean in the body of the mirror below the Edit Draft?

Please don't worry. That's often a shorthand I use when entering data.

If I were to post this information here outside of the mirror-

<<Botvinnik refused to stay in the "Kurhaus" and was given rooms in the "Hotel Twee Staden." He was joined at the Hotel by his wife, daughter, and his <<<2d>>> Ragozin.>

or

<Source for Moscow being the <<<2d>>> venue by lot (drawing of pawn)>,

I'm pretty sure that I would type out the word "second" if posting the information on an actual game, forum, player, or tournament page.

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You do raise a good point though about the actual EDIT Drafts.

These use a mixture of numerals (2) and written out numbers (two).

In some cases, such as with amounts of money, it seems (to me) that it looks better on the page to write $5,000 dollars than to write five thousand dollars.

But in other cases, (to me), I think the reverse looks better.

Take this sentence from our current <1948> draft:

<Players were permitted 2 assistants to help analyze adjourned games.>

That would look better to me as <two> assistants.

And take the case of ordinal numbers. Some writers prefer to say 1st, 2d, 3d, 4th, and so on.

I prefer to type the names of the oridinals- first, second, third, fourth, and so on.

I can tell you something I found out on this topic with my handy "online word an character counter"- it counts <1st> as the same "number of words" as <first>.

So we're not saving space by choosing <1st> over <first>.

Mar-19-14
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  WCC Editing Project: <OhioBackToEditingFan>

<"In Moscow, the masters played in the magnificent Salle des Colonnes in front of 2000 spectators. 3000 more were in the streets outside following the action on a giant demonstration board.">

I like it better also. I'm putting it in now.

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I also put this change in just now:

<Players were permitted <<<two>>> assistants to help analyze adjourned games>

Mar-19-14
Premium Chessgames Member
  WCC Editing Project: <Ohio> Aha-

Also <me being sick> update.

I'm not going to send in our Game Collection: WCC: FIDE WCC Tournament 1948 draft until

SUNDAY, SUNDAY, SUNDAY.

WE'RE FILLING THE Salle des Colonnes WITH MUD.

SUNDAY, SUNDAY, SUNDAY

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ohp...

Mar-19-14
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  OhioChessFan: I'm not 100% on board with "3000 more". Is the implied "spectators" enough of a subject for that sentence? Maybe it should be "3000 more people". I seek opinions.
Mar-20-14
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  WCC Editing Project: <Ohio>

I like "3000 more people" much better than what's there now.

I also seek further opinions.

Mar-20-14  Karpova: "3000 more people" looks fine.

What about a comma - "3,000" and "2,000", like for money?

Mar-20-14
Premium Chessgames Member
  WCC Editing Project: Ok three votes now so it's in.

I like "3,000" people better as well.

Mar-20-14
Premium Chessgames Member
  WCC Editing Project: Here we go:

Game Collection: WCC: FIDE WCC Tournament 1948

In Moscow, the masters played in the magnificent Salle des Colonnes in front of 2,000 spectators. 3,000 more people were in the streets outside following the action on a giant demonstration board.

Mar-20-14
Premium Chessgames Member
  WCC Editing Project: <Karpova>

Did you see this yet?

Yes, not only did you find the right Dutch passsage:

http://www.maxpam.nl/archief/IBOTWI...

Question: - Fischer heeft altijd beweerd dat de Sovjet-spelers in combine tegen hem speelden. Is er indertijd wel eens sprake geweest van zo'n combine?

Botvinnik: <"In het geval van Fischer kan ik daar geen oordeel over geven, maat ik heb zelf wel eens meegemaakt dat er opdrachten werden verstrekt. In 1948 speelde ik met Keres, Smislov, Reshevsky en Euwe om de wereldtitel. Na de eerste helft van het toernooi, dat in Nederland werd gespeeld, werd het duidelijk dat ik de nieuwe wereldkampioen zou worden. Ik stond op kop. Tijdens de tweede helft in Moskou gebeurde er iets onaangenaams. Op heel hoog niveau werd voorgesteld dat de andere Russische spelers expres tegen mij zouden verliezen, om er zeker van te zijn dat er een Sovjet-wereldkampioen zou komen.>

Question: - Hoe hoog?

Botvinnik: <"Stalin heeft dat persoonlijk voorgesteld. Maar ik heb dat natuurlijk geweigerd! Het was een intrige tegenover mij om mij te kleineren. Een belachelijk voorstel, slechts gedaan om mij als de toekomstige wereldkampioen nog even te kleineren. In sommige kringen wilde men liever dat Keres wereldkampioen zou worden. Het was oneerbaar, want ik had al lang bewezen dat ik op dat moment sterker was dan Keres en Smislov.>

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But check out this translation in full from our dear friend <dakgootje>:

Question: - Fischer has always asserted that the Sovjet players played together against him. Has such a team-play* taken place at the time?

Botvinnik: <"I can't judge regarding the case of Fischer, but I've personally experienced that orders were handed out. In 1948 I played with Keres, Smyslov, Reshevsky and Euwe for the World Title. After the first half of the tournament, which was played in the Netherlands, it became clear that I would become the new World Champion. I had the lead. During the second half in Moscow something unpleasant happened. From very high up it was proposed that the other Russian competitors would lose to me on purpose, so as it be sure that there'd be a Sovjet-World Champion.>

Question: - How high up?

Botvinnik: <"Stalin has proposed it personally. But of course I've refused! It was an intrigue against me to belittle me. A preposterous proposal, merely done to diminish me as future World Champion. In some circles it was preferred that Keres would become World Champion. I was dishonorable, because I'd long proven to be stronger at the time than Keres and Smyslov.>

Mar-20-14
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  OhioChessFan: <3,000 more people were in the streets outside following the action on a giant demonstration board.>

Needs a comma after "outside".

Mar-20-14
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  WCC Editing Project: <Ohio>

<<3,000 more people were in the streets outside following the action on a giant demonstration board.> Needs a comma after "outside".>

I believe you're right about that.

I'll change it now.

Mar-20-14
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  OhioChessFan: <At the July 1946 Winterthur congress, FIDE proposed the vacant title be contested in June 1947 in the Netherlands.>

I'd like a comma after "1947".

<On 15 Sept 1946 the proposed contestants (except Fine) met in Moscow to iron out the details.>

Halfway between "I'd like" and "needs" a comma after "1946".

<The Soviet Sports Committee refused this idea outright because they wanted all the games to be played in Moscow.>

It would be okay to have a comma after "outright". It's okay not to.

<Keres proceeded to <lose in 23 moves> <insert game link>- Botvinnik vs Keres, 1948, allowing Botvinnik to carry a 1.5 point lead into the Moscow leg. >

I'm not sure that the two clauses are equitable. Did that one game allow Botvinnik to take a 1.5 point lead? Well, sort of. I have to think about this one. It might be the word "allowing" that bothers me. But something doesn't feel right here.

Mar-20-14
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  WCC Editing Project: <OhioCommaQuiz>

I'm going to leave all of these up for colleague opinions. I may even form a few of my own:

COMMA EDITS:

<<At the July 1946 Winterthur congress, FIDE proposed the vacant title be contested in June 1947 in the Netherlands.> I'd like a comma after "1947".

<On 15 Sept 1946 the proposed contestants (except Fine) met in Moscow to iron out the details.>

Halfway between "I'd like" and "needs" a comma after "1946".

<The Soviet Sports Committee refused this idea outright because they wanted all the games to be played in Moscow.>

It would be okay to have a comma after "outright". It's okay not to.>

#######################

With regard to this:

<Keres proceeded to <lose in 23 moves> <insert game link>- Botvinnik vs Keres, 1948, allowing Botvinnik to carry a 1.5 point lead into the Moscow leg. >

<I'm not sure that the two clauses are equitable. Did that one game allow Botvinnik to take a 1.5 point lead? Well, sort of. I have to think about this one. It might be the word "allowing" that bothers me. But something doesn't feel right here.>

If you can construct something better, I'll be happy to put it in the mirror.

Mar-20-14  Karpova: Looking at the original intro, I wonder whether there will be a crosstable for http://www.chessgames.com/perl/ches... - it certainly should. And then, the result of the players could be more easily compared.

It seems that after round 8 (the Keres game in question), Botvinnik was at +4, while the 2nd best Reshevsky stood at +1, after drawing Euwe. So, yes, the win against Keres made the 1.5 points lead possible. What about <enabling> instead of <allowing>?

Mar-20-14
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  perfidious: <OCF: As one example, the word "2nds" is used in the current draft when referring to "seconds" and I find that unacceptable.>

Agreed-even in the context of a player's finish in an event, I am not wild about numerals over prose, but this can clearly be improved.

Mar-20-14  Karpova: I think that we should restrict editing to the actual drafts (i. e. <intro> + <footnotes> + <for further reading>) which will be published, not to the supplementary and source material below drafts in the mirrors, e. g. the source for <2d> as an abbreviation for <second>.

Because editing of all of that text would take an incredible amount of time, although the text is not going to be published (unlike the draft), at least not the way it is presented below the draft in the mirror.

The supplementary material is posted there to store additional information for the the drafts, e. g. found by other people or in several scattered sources or which became available only later, or simply to collect crucial bits of information to have it at hand, or make some background information available to others to provide context.

In this case, it should be acceptable to give it a less formal appearance, if it is still understandable.

Mar-20-14
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  perfidious: <WCC: <achieve> was a big proponent of deleting and re-editing posts that you notice have mistakes in them, before the 30 minute "delete" limit expires. He was the first person who advised me to do this.>

A sound idea, though it should be noted that the actual window is one hour-a limit only too familiar to yours truly and his occasional tendency towards perfectionism.

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